
Title: Dark Shadows
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Characters: Fallon Christopher (Fran), Nathan Davis, Kristian Evanovich, Mystery Man
Prompt: 015. Hatred
Word Count: 1,005
Rating: PG-13
Type: Series: 28 of 33
Summary: Fran's undercover mission is put into action and stirs up someone's inner hatred.
Warnings: Language
Fran tried not to squirm as a female officer placed a wire tap in some very private places. As she finished, Fran glanced at herself in the mirror of the ladies restroom, she had tried to find as provocative an outfit she could without completely losing all her standards. She had settled on a black bra top and leather skirt, the trashy look complete with heavy makeup. She sighed, she was utterly embarrassed to even leave the room like this much less be seen in public by complete strangers, the things they would think of her.
She sucked in a breath and left the safety of the restroom to meet the undercover team that was waiting. Nathan and Kristian were standing together, along with a few other officers that had changed from their regular uniforms into plainclothes. To her surprise, no one whistled or made any snide comments, it was almost as if they admired her, a silent salute that respected what she was about to do.
She could barely meet Nathan’s eyes as she walked over to him, her hands unconsciously fidgeted at her bare waist, never could she remember feeling so vulnerable and exposed.
Nathan grabbed one of her hands instinctively, emotion bottled up inside him ready to explode at any second, “There’s still time, we can send in one of ours, you don’t have to do this Frannie.”
She took a deep breath and calmed at the feel of his hand on hers, “No, I’ll be fine,” she blew out a long, much needed sigh, “I’m ready.”
Nathan crossed his brows, he couldn’t believe he was about to watch her attempt to catch a serial killer, “Okay, let’s do this.”
*~*~*
Nathan had dropped her off two blocks away from the club and she watched him vanish into the night to his post, along with the other officers. They were out there watching somewhere but Fran still couldn’t seem to stop her heart from pounding in her chest. Despite knowing he was only a minute away, the sights and sounds of the late night city were still frightening for a woman who was very much alone. She started walking, wondering why these girls would do it in the first place, she would much rather be curled up safely at home with a good book and a glass of red wine.
She came around the corner, the loud pulse of music vibrating from the walls of the club, the neon lights glowing softly onto the sidewalk. She panicked for a moment and leaned up against the wall, “Nathan?” she breathed into the small microphone in her chest.
She instantly heard his voice through the small piece they had placed in her ear, “I’m here Frannie, what’s wrong? You remember the code word, don’t you?”
She calmed down, even though she couldn’t see him, she knew he would be there in a second if something happened, he was always there for her no matter what, “Yes, I remember. I’m okay, just having a mild panic attack. I’m going to head inside now.”
“Okay, just remember to take deep breaths, we’re right with you every step of the way.”
She headed up the steps to the club, ready to do something great and make a true difference, what she knew she was truly destined for. As she stepped inside, a pair of eyes watched her from the street as she disappeared through the door.
What the fuck is she doing here?
He felt his head pound furiously as he realized she was undeserving; a hollow, vain, empty shell like the rest of them.
Dressed like a common whore, how could you do this to me! Look what I did for you and this is how you repay me!
*~*~*
Fran sat down at the bar, trying not to observe the room so obviously. There were a few people dancing, a couple of men chatting, pointing at some pretty girls. Nothing out of the ordinary. It occurred to her however, that this killer had to be just that, ordinary. He was probably handsome, charismatic, a regular guy that would blend right in…
“Hi there. May I join you?” A deep voice pulled her out of her thoughts like whiplash, she turned around and looked up at just such a handsome, ordinary looking man.
Fran shivered slightly, she didn’t expect it to happen so soon, she nearly faltered on a reply, “Um, of course.” she flashed him her fakest smile and tried to be charming despite her stomach lurching at the thought of what this guy could be thinking of doing to her.
Nathan’s blood boiled as he listened in on the conversation, the guy offered to buy her a drink, she accepted. He could hear in her voice that she was nervous, why did he agree to let her do this? He started to breathe rapidly, his anger stewing just below boiling.
“Hey, you okay?” Kristian stared at him from the passenger’s seat, “She’s all right Nate, nothing’s happening.”
Nathan sighed, “You’re right. I just had no idea it would feel like this. Just hearing this bastard…if he lays one fucking hand on her…”
“He won’t, that’s why we’re here, remember? She knows what she’s doing. As soon as he makes a move, she’ll let us know.”
Nathan bit his fingernail as he heard Fran say the one sentence he never wanted to hear-
“How about going back to your place?”
The man perked up his eyebrows and a wolf-like grin spread across his face, “All right then, nothing like a direct woman.”
He paid for their drinks and bowed slightly to her to go in front of him. She complied and prayed to her legs to stop shaking so she could actually walk outside. The man hailed a cab and they got inside, leaving the club and the rest of the world in the dark night behind them.
Nathan grabbed his police radio, “Let’s move people, if anyone loses this son of a bitch, they’re fucking fired.”
8 comments:
oh wow this is good! I love the detail, the first shot, the purple color you used for the club lighting, the whole atmosphere!
I hope Nathan doesn't lose track of her. Fran is doing such a dangerous thing. And I am guessing there is a reason you didn't show the face of the guy who picked her up....
Oooh, this is really good.
This chapter really shows how suicidal Fran really is. LOL. I hope she seriously knows what she's doing.
I'm hoping Nate can keep his cool for now and doesn't do anything he'll regret.
Great job, Em!
S.B. - Thank you! I like these shots too, they were actually fun to do, which hardly ever happens.
Nathan is definitely struggling right now, being in the real situation is harder for him than he thought but we'll see if he can pull it together!
Yes, even with the police backup, Fran is crazy! I would never be so gutsy!
There is a reason, no need to find out who he is just yet. ;)
Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment!
RedRose, Ha ha! Yeah Fran is doing something completely insane. Like I said above, even with the police behind her, a lot can still happen.
Nathan is certainly being put to the test, keeping his police judgement while having to worry about her is going to be hard for him, truth be told he's too personally involved and shouldn't even be doing this but he is a good cop, so we'll see!
Thank you for reading and leaving a comment!
I like the idea of the boys giving her a 'silent salute' to what she's doing, I mean she is really is very courageous.
Wouldn't it suck if she got picked up by the wrong guy and this one is just trying to get in her pants? :P
At least she knows Nathan is there and I really don't think he would let himself mess it up.
:)
EkhoGirl, yeah I like the silent salute too. I think if a civilian was really allowed to do something like this the cops would definitely admire them for it.
LOL! Now there's a thought! He could be the killer or not, will have to wait and see! At least this is directly continued in the next part so won't have to wait too long. :)
Thank you so much for reading, I appreciate it!
All this time I suspected her boyfriend but obviously she would recognize him. And yet it is someone who knows her even though she doesn't seem to recognize him. Unless the guy she is leaving with is not the killer...and the worst thought I have is that they arrest him, Fran goes home and encounters the real killer.
Emily you have such a way with a mystery. I can't wait until the next update.
Your shots were stunning by the way.
Gayl, LOL! I love how your brain works! I think you should write a mystery, you always come up with the most interesting theories! :D
Thank you, I am going to try doing the next updates until the end all at once and posting them close together since things are almost at an end, the way I have this written it would be too cruel to make everyone wait a month in between!
Thank you again for reading, glad you're enjoying it!
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